Zayden
Unborn
[M:0]
"It's a giant mushroom, maybe it's friendly!"
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Post by Zayden on May 18, 2012 6:12:00 GMT -6
Some lyrics to describe your character here~ - NOT REQUIRED
--BASICS--
Name :: Anthony, Burnpaw, Burnstripe
Gender :: Tom
Age :: 8 moons
Description :: Leopard-spotted tom with rusty brown-orange eyes.
Alliance :: Shadowclan
Position :: Medicine Apprentice
--PHYSIQUE--
Appearance
Petite in form, Burnpaw is rather snake like in shape. With leopard like spots dancing on a dirt coat, the boy is able to blend well in a forested terrain. His eyes are a rusty brown-orange color. His forehead is home to darker stripe patterns, sitting between two bowl-like ears. Along his spine, just above his rump, sits a sore-looking line where fur no longer grows. It raw flesh mingling with black specks, signaling that it is where a flame has licked
Abilities
He may be small but he is quick and nimble
--Personality--
Likes :: Being honest and fighting
Loves :: Helping the injured
Hates :: Kittens who still have their parents
Fears :: Fires
Flaws :: Raw skin from when he was burnt
Burnpaw is a rather moody individual. Though he likes to help, he is prone to being stubborn and brutally honest when a situation does not call for it. He is loyal to his Clan and will do anything to heal the sick or injured, but he does it sourly, hiding away his smile one most occasions. He is particularly foul around children who have their parents still, jealousy turning his heart black with distaste.
--HISTORY--
Kin :: list here. (Do they have any living family members? What are their names?)
History
Burnpaw was, at one point, named Anthony. He was born to a father (Shadow) and a mother (Jasmine), alongside one sister (Jenna). They were a kittypet family with twolegs that adored them and spoiled them rotten. After six months of living the dream life, a fire caught from a forgotten candle, bursting flames to lick at the entire house. Burnpaw was rescued by a passing Shadowclan cat, but the rest of his family were dead. Going through a time of depression, Burnpaw lost all of his kittypet plumpness and has not been able to get it back due to the lack of excess in the wild. Burnpaw, however moody he is a physical fighter, but he decided he had to become medicine cat apprentice, rather than warrior apprentice
--ABOUT YOU--
What can we call you? :: Zayden, Zay zay
Age? :: 16 not for long tho
How long have you been RPing? Umm 3 or 4 years now :: Are you semi-literate? Literate? Advanced? How long have you been literite/semi/advanced? Well I can be all of these depends on how bad my writers block is which I have often cause I rp so much lol
How did you find us? :: www.brokentruthsv2.proboards.com I rp there [BrokenTruthsV2/url]
Secret word! :: +2k!
RP sample
"Stubborn fool" I snarl, "You cant run forever". I creep back in front of Eznho that when I notice how weak he look, this will not take long, I all of a sudden burst out laughing. There is not way i could lose this, Eznho will fall with ease all I have to do is weaken him. I snap back to reality and stop laughing, my eyes narrow in concentration, look forward at every possibility planning ahead. I wild thought pops in my head from the first time I battled him that little trick I did... he stopped it because he was heavier but now it seems I have the weight advantage. Tempting, tempting... now is the time to shine show them all i am not one to be messed with. My muscles ripple and i advance forward but instead of sliding under Eznho I jump over planning to come crashing down on his back side, pinning him down like he did to me. Claws extended, teeth baring, I prepare for the hit. Time to try and end it... now
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Post by Night on May 18, 2012 10:42:10 GMT -6
[/i][/size][/font] We noticed it's a WIP, but we have tips! Comments or suggestions: Since this is your first cat, you must fill out the "About You" section located next to the bio template! Once this is done, then I will be able to accept Burnpaw~ [/blockquote][/center]
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Zayden
Unborn
[M:0]
"It's a giant mushroom, maybe it's friendly!"
Posts: 5
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Post by Zayden on May 18, 2012 11:10:51 GMT -6
Where do I post the about me at? And okay
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Zayden
Unborn
[M:0]
"It's a giant mushroom, maybe it's friendly!"
Posts: 5
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Post by Zayden on May 18, 2012 11:27:44 GMT -6
Never Mind I Posted on Introductions lol
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Post by Night on May 18, 2012 14:19:44 GMT -6
It goes into the bio of your first cat ^^; I suppose I'll put it in for you. P.s: The secret word is located in the rules, right here thesestarrynights.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=codes&action=display&thread=5One word is highlighted, and you have to have it in order for your first cat to be accepted. If you find the other one, it gets you an extra 2k! I put it in for ya, so find that secret word and put it in, and Burnpaw will be accepted!
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Zayden
Unborn
[M:0]
"It's a giant mushroom, maybe it's friendly!"
Posts: 5
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Post by Zayden on May 18, 2012 18:34:12 GMT -6
Okay I put them Night
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Post by Night on May 18, 2012 19:32:17 GMT -6
Congratulations! Your character has been [style=width: 300px; font-size: 30px; letter-spacing: -3px; color: #000000; font-family: Viner Hand ITC; text-align: center; font-weight: bold]ACCEPTED! [/style] You can now begin roleplaying with your character! Awesome! Welcome to the site! :3
[/style] Don't forget to post in the Name claim!
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